Short episode of my writing: Stolen car - witness version

Witness version

When I came home, I discovered that someone had stolen my car.

I called the police.

When they came, I was sitting in front of the garage.

They asked me: what happened, sir?

but I couldn’t say anything.

Next morning when I was in a swimming – pool,

I met two men, who were talking about the car, which they had stolen a day before.

Then I notice that gentlemen were talking about my car!

I phoned my friend who is a policeman.

Thankfully, soon I had my car back and young thieves went to the arrest.

A month later someone phoned me.

I didn’t recognize the voice.

I’m pretty sure that was a man voice.

He wanted money and later he said that he kill me that night.

I was scared. At 7 p.m., I left home and drove to my best friend – Tom.

That night we were talking about life, work, family and many another things.

At about 2 a.m. my phone rang, but the rang was too short  to answer it!

15 minutes later, we heard unexpectly knocking to the door.

W came out, but there wasn’t anybody.

So…,

We went back to home.

At about 5 a.m., when we were sleeping I heard that somebody broke the window.

I remember that Tom was upstairs, in his room, I stood up and went down to see what happened.

Soon, Tom has come down, we opened front door and all what we saw than, was a new black BMW which was coming out.